1. He rearranges subject and verbs i.e.
Ferdinand says, “Space enough / Have I in such a prison” (1.2.599-600)
Vs. “I have enough space in such a prison.”
Miranda says, “More to know / Did never meddle with my thoughts” (1.2.25-26)
Vs. “to know more never did meddle…”
2. Sometimes we have to locate and arrange words that “belong together” (xix)
Prospero says,
I, thus neglecting wordly ends, all dedicated
To closeness and the bettering of my mind
With that which, but by being so retired,
O’erprized all popular rate, in my false brother
Awaked an evil nature… (1.2.109-13)
3. To make it even more exciting, Shakespeare will omit words!
Ferdinand says, “He does hear me, / And that he does I weep. Myself am Naples” (1.2.520-21).
Vs. “He does hear me, and [it is because he does that] I weep. [I] myself am Naples. “
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